Contributed byh J Morris
I took this picture out at the park. There was a small red go cart. i took a picture with a focus of one its lights. i like the picture for the smooth texture of this car. I like the angle of this picture as well because it takes your eye across the whole picture. So tell me what you think.
Thursday, February 14
Little Red Car
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6 comments:
there was a good idea behind this picture, but poor execution. The reflection of the sun creates an eye soar, and the composition is poor.
I personally like the photo, the smooth texture of the go kart ads a nice touch to the picture. I personally think the composition was well done, and also like how there is a reflection on the car.
Hunter Sphs
I like the photo, also. The sun reflection doesn't hurt it, and the other subtle reflections on the go-kart's hood are nice. I love the color.
I like the colors in this shot but it's a bit too much on the ol' eyes. I would recommend showing more green which might help to dim the piece down a bit and putting in more contrast. Also, like poor sick mattox's shot, this piece is kinda empty. I like the concept of focusing in on the light cause its a BAM in your face kinda deal but I wouldnt mind seeing more of that tag (looks like it might say turbo or toro...). I dont know how you would include more background and tag at the same time though. You'll have to work on that one yourself.
Ok subject but the reflection of the sun could have been a reflection of something more interesting. Perhaps something that would give us more clues as to what the object or environment is. I also wish you cropped out the background totally as it does not add to the image.
This picture is pretty cool because the subject seems to be the reflection on the car, instead of the red car itself. Not bad. Crop bout the background and sharpen it out.
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