i really like this rauschenburg. it has a really cool nostalgic feel to it. the pictures on the bottom right that are laying more flat add a unique third dimension to these usually 2d collages. the ink splats add a good bit of character too.
The first time I saw this piece, it genuinely left me speechless. You did a phenomenal job; I love that you gave what is usually a two dimensional project some depth of field with the photos in the bottom right hand corner. I also really like the angle of the camera; it helps continue the likelihood of the depth of field, like this is someone's editing cubby. I love that you left the picture of the woman distressed and and showed off the frayed edges of the shot by surrounding it with a white border. The apparent sun-induced discoloration of the pictures you chose fit so nicely together, and I like that you added a hint of color with the turquoise shot in the back and the rosary on the bottom. And the stark contrast of the black and white blank film strip looks really great. Good job layering the brush strokes, and you also did wonderfully with your selection of which brush strokes to use. Basically, you did an incredible job, and I LOVE the way this piece turned out. GREAT JOB!
This high school photoblog is the product of the photography students at Spain Park High School in Hoover, Al.
Students take turns posting one of their images along with a brief explanation each school day. The students also trade critiques with their peers from other schools around the country (see high school blog links below).
We are always looking to expand our participating schools. If your photography program starts a blog, email Mr. Myers so he can add your link to our growing list. emyers@hoover.k12.al.us
Feel free to give constructive criticism or complements if you see an image you enjoy. You can leave an anonymous comment, but please sign your initials and your school's name.
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i really like this rauschenburg. it has a really cool nostalgic feel to it. the pictures on the bottom right that are laying more flat add a unique third dimension to these usually 2d collages. the ink splats add a good bit of character too.
i really like this! there is depth and texture, it is very attractive to the viewer. fantastic job!
The first time I saw this piece, it genuinely left me speechless. You did a phenomenal job; I love that you gave what is usually a two dimensional project some depth of field with the photos in the bottom right hand corner. I also really like the angle of the camera; it helps continue the likelihood of the depth of field, like this is someone's editing cubby. I love that you left the picture of the woman distressed and and showed off the frayed edges of the shot by surrounding it with a white border. The apparent sun-induced discoloration of the pictures you chose fit so nicely together, and I like that you added a hint of color with the turquoise shot in the back and the rosary on the bottom. And the stark contrast of the black and white blank film strip looks really great. Good job layering the brush strokes, and you also did wonderfully with your selection of which brush strokes to use. Basically, you did an incredible job, and I LOVE the way this piece turned out. GREAT JOB!
Bergen SPHS
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